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Elena's avatar

Now this is EXACTLY what I want to read!

A. Dimitri's avatar

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it

Anthony Ledger's avatar

Great job. This transported me to the bog, and oh how I want to vanish into it too

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Thank you🙏

Breeze Delacroix's avatar

This was gripping. I’m in a rush right now trying to reach my social media quotas for the day. Not only did your story keep me reading, but it forced me to spend another few minutes. Writing this just to let you know I enjoyed it.

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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it

W.A.Roberts's avatar

This was haunting. I loved it .

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Thank you!🙏

David Alan Richards's avatar

Really good. Thank you. I'm still scared.

This story could be published professionally.

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Thank you!🙏

Sloane Bowman's avatar

I love your imagery! Horror that takes place in nature is a personal fav

kalli's avatar

great piece!!

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Thank you!

Alaina Vale's avatar

You packed a lot into a very small scene. Great work!

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Thank you!

druscilla  (A.R. Schmierer)'s avatar

This is quite fun 💚

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Thank you!

Cory's avatar

Chilling, love it! ❤️

V. M. Long's avatar

Holy hell this was unsettling and beautifully written. Loved it.

Matthew E Meurer's avatar

The intro pulled me in quickly.

Perfect for the story you told here, I liked it!

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J.J. Walker's avatar

Really enjoyed this!

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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it

Jessi J. Watson's avatar

Omg chills 🫣🖤love this so much

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Thank you so much!

Mat the Ramen Cat's avatar

"The vigil continued, as it always had" chills by the end. Well done 👏

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Thank you very much!

Tretaxis Dispatches's avatar

Great pacing to your writing 💀👻

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Thank you!