Fantastic. Job well done. You really encapsulated what it feels like to be awake for four days. Time is completely irrelevant by that point. In case you didn't know, you start hallucinating on day four
“Time stopped keeping track before I did.” What a powerful line and really emphasized the weight to the story and the character’s situation. Fantastic read.
I love the detail of the dogs all starting to bark at 3 am. Gripping!
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Fantastic. Job well done. You really encapsulated what it feels like to be awake for four days. Time is completely irrelevant by that point. In case you didn't know, you start hallucinating on day four
Thank you🙏
Oh very very cool! So many great lines in here, like: "and wondering if the sound was water or something trying to remember my name." OOF love it
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Yesss this is good.
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Ooo this was a good one!
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Nicely done 🙂
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No, thank you 🙏
Insane opening line!
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Amazing as usual!
Thank you so much!🤍
Dimitri, i'm speechless with this piece oh my god. I'm excitedd for more of your work.
Thank you so much!!!!
“Time stopped keeping track before I did.” What a powerful line and really emphasized the weight to the story and the character’s situation. Fantastic read.
Thank you so much!